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There's room to improve. Music and voices were iffy (voices were a little drab, music was... strange, different; may be what you were going for). The animation was done well, though at some points I didn't quite follow what was going on. The storyline and characters? Awesome. Seriously, I want to see more.
One other critique, does it have to be so... crude?
Eh, another creative license choice of your own, i suppose
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10/10. 5/5. Faved submission, both artists, shared your website on fb.
This is amazing, ingenious! It left me wishing the second one was already out - I am truly happy to hear that a second one is already in the works. Jeeze, where do I start.
The music... Hania, you are a god. The storytelling - how the words managed to interact/harmonize with the music without being sung? Mind-blowing. The artwork was crisp, clean, and wonderfully eye-catching. How you managed to create depth on an all-black character with no shadowing, I'll never know. And you managed to keep it light and fun, even though the storyline was rather dark. "You cursed--" "Shut up, billy!" <<- Best. Line. Ever.
I will stalk your website until the second one comes out. :D
Man, I need to get screencaps.
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The game is just short of ingenious. I can't quite place my finger on why, though. Some of the other reviewers are right, though. The music, while beautiful, gets repetitive. Maybe if you change the music from one track to another (i.e. There's a track for being in Outer Space, for being on Planet A, for being on Planet B, etc). The graphics are very nice, but as almost everything on all planets was a washed out color, the graphics begin to blur. Gameplay was unique and enjoyable - quite a difference from the usual stuff. However, more of an explanation was needed.
9/10, 4/5, faved.
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Am I the only one who thinks the narrator sounds like Deckard Cain?
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I watched this at 3:30 in the morning. And I'm prone to nightmares. You do the math.
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I wish I had a crayon like that. Or better yet, a pencil, so I can erase things out of existence, too.
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"The title alone was after my heart"
The music video did me in though. Music *is* epic. Thanks for the submission, I really enjoyed it.
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When I started the game, I got an error. A popup came up, in game, and said "Error 1009. <OK>" So I hit okay, and the menu came up. Didn't seem to be a big error. But I couldn't hit play.
I've played the game before, so I don't know what the problem could be.
On the game itself, I'd say a 9/10 only because it was a demo. But I started playing, and then realized two hours had passed. :D
-1 for errors.
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It was boring. Too easy, really. You should make it a bit harder by putting in silver balls (or another color, I don't care). Make it so that the silver balls give you more sprays, and all the other colors only give you points. Not only will that make it harder, it will make it more entertaining.
Another thing you might try is if you spread out the balls so that they're not so easy to knock down.
Another idea I just thought of: You could add balls that are harder or impossible to knock down. That'd add an element to the game.
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Not much to do, but it's amazingly cute! Look! He's so chibi!
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